TLC by Chrouya
Script: PhotoKano 06 [mdai]
Workraw: PhotoKano 06 (480p)

{DISCONTINUED -- ALREADY RELEASED WITHOUT MY EDITS}

4
I had the most fun back when...{The most fun I had back then...}
I had the most fun back in those days...{The most fun I had back then...}
5
...we all played together until we were covered with mud and it got dark out, Maeda-kun.
...when we played football and such all together until we were covered with mud and it got dark out.
{I feel like the suspense in this sentence is being removed otherwise}
{drop the Maeda-kun, that would already be included in the "all" in the Japanese context}
{combine with line 6}

6
And when we played football.{the ordering doesn't really work here lol -alta}
{I'd combine this line with line 5}

7
I wished I had been born a boy too.
I wished I had been born a boy like you.
{Just a suggestion if it sounds a bit too ambigious.}

^^^ Sorry if this isn't consistant with the translation from episode 5 ^^;